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Thursday, 02 August 2012

Do Not Use The Elevators

By Jackie Harrison

Was I dreaming? It seemed like I had just dozed off, having gone to sleep about 11:20PM.

I thought I heard, "Fire! Fire!" I shook off my slumber and looked at my clock. It was 12:45. I listened again. Sure enough the alarm in my condominium was going off. "Fire! Fire," it said, "Do not use the elevators."

I asked myself, "Should I ignore it and just stay put?" A voice inside me said no. "If this is a real fire," I told myself, "no fire equipment can reach beyond the tenth floor and I am on the eighteenth floor.”

I hurriedly tore off my night gown and threw on my handy, thin house dress with nothing underneath but panties. I grabbed my emergency inhaler. Something told me to wet a towel to take with me. I slid into my old, scuff bedroom shoes (a big mistake), grabbed my keys and locked the door.

I started down the stairs. I was alright until I got to the 12th floor where the stairs were filled with smoke. I placed the wet towel over my nose and mouth. By the 10th floor, heavy black smoke stung my eyes. I tried to enter the door to get out of the stairway when I encountered a young paramedic carrying a lady on his back. He would not allow me to enter.

I followed behind him, struggling to keep shoes on. The lady cried out as the paramedic stumbled a bit, "You are going to drop me!." He assured her he was not. They soon left me in the darkness.

The closer to the ground I got the worse the smoke was. I thanked God that I had the foresight to bring along a wet towel.

I passed through the lobby, even heavier with smoke, and out the front where people were standing and sitting around.

There were nine fire trucks and several EMT vehicles. A couple of women were lying on stretchers and several people were receiving portable oxygen. I wanted to ask for some of it but my pride would not allow it in spite of my chronic respiratory condition.

I decided to go to the ocean deck behind the building to get away from the smoke.

It was not a typical summer night. The 40 mile-per-hour winds were fierce and cold, penetrating my thin dress. I was short of breath and I kept losing my shoes as I scuffed across the concrete. I wasn't sure I could make it to the lounge chairs. I hoped the darkness was hiding my struggle.

Shivering, I watched thick black smoke billowing from the roof of the building. The same paramedic who carried the woman down the stairs came to check on us. I asked how the lady was and he said, "She was a trooper."

I said, "You were the trooper."

I remained on the pool deck for 4-1/2 hours with no word about when or if we could return to our apartments. I decided to brave the walk once more and go up front to find out.

I had hardly sat down on the side wall of the building when I experienced another problem. It was an urgent bladder call. The only bathrooms were inside.

When I was on the pool deck, I remembered a man going into the men's sauna. "Thank goodness I have my key to the women's sauna," I thought. However, this meant another torturous route across the dark and windy deck.

Inside the sauna, total darkness and oppressive smoke greeted me. I felt my way to the toilet, trying to hold my breath and using it as fast as I could. Then I walked to the wind barrier area on the pool deck.

I stretched out on the recliner and had barely closed my eyes when raindrops started falling. I struggled once more to the front of the building to find shelter. It was here that I first noticed my dress was on backward and there were holes in the soles of my shoes.

I returned to my apartment at 8AM. My daughter was due to arrive for her four-day visit at 10AM.

The next day the muscles in the back of my thighs almost gave way. They reminded me that I need to practice stair-walking in case of another emergency.


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Comments

What a frightening experience. You told the story well.


I was hoping you were going to end your account of that horrible night with "But it was only a bad dream."

Sad to say it was all too real and I admire your courage in making the best out of a terrible experience and being here to tell us all about it.

You were the trooper. Great story.

Dreadful experience.
Admirable courage.
Wonderful story.

Bravo, bravo! What a gutsy young (?) lady to go through that helter-skelter of a fire, wearing her dress backwards with nothing underneath but her panties. Wow! Good thing there was no press photographer there to capture that moment for posterity.

One reason why I never bought a condo, particularly on the 18th floor. Jackie, can I name you as the Dazed Condo Lady? Or, better, as the Lady Trooper?

This is a gripping and dramatic story, filled with vivid detail. I laughed out loud about your finally realizing that your dress was on backwards.

Very well done!

Wow is all I can say; and then down 18 floors with more than half smoke filled. Lady you are indeed a trooper.

A harrowing tale worth telling about and certainly well-told!

What a gripping tale! So glad you survived to tell it!

Graphic and well written, I do hope it was not true, however it's essence tells me it was.. How frightened you were, YET managed to get out. Who cares if you aren't dressed sensibly just get out. Our fire warning/teaching at our schools here is to get down( drop to your knees) to avoid the smoke, and Go Go Go ( in the direction of EXIT) but this is not so easy for older or disabled folk. So have a plan that is best for you, as Jackie here appears to have at least the sense and ability to Go Go Go. So pleased you are safe if this is a true story Jackie.

This was a true story. Jackie

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