A TGB READER'S STORY: Grave Stones
Tuesday, 28 May 2019
By Sylvia Li
An old worn-down grief.
Still, amid dry autumn leaves,
Wind stirs an echo.
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The story behind this poem: a friend in Pennsylvania found these headstones in the woods. From the dates, these were two and a half century old graves of children. I thought about those long-ago families, grieving a loss in a very human way, even though it happened much more back then. It seemed to want a haiku, somehow.
Grave also means solemn. Still means ‘and yet.’ Still also means ‘quiet,’ and here, I want to use both meanings.
Posted by: Sylvia | Tuesday, 28 May 2019 at 06:23 AM
Very poignant thank you!
Posted by: Kate R | Tuesday, 28 May 2019 at 08:09 AM
How beautiful, and as Kate said, poignant. We need to let ourselves grieve in our own ways, and words shared do seem to help. I've tried a grief group once, and enjoyed that everyone was sharing on the same emotion, but I've not gone back.
Posted by: Barb Rogers | Tuesday, 28 May 2019 at 08:41 AM
Love this...a few words can say so much.
I collect sayings and some poems that mean a lot to me. This I saved. Thanks
Posted by: Mary | Tuesday, 28 May 2019 at 09:38 AM
Thank you Sylvia, and your haiku suits the photograph well. Your later comments brought it to life.
Posted by: Simone | Tuesday, 28 May 2019 at 09:39 AM
Lovely haiku, thank you.
Posted by: Salinda Dahl | Tuesday, 28 May 2019 at 10:54 AM
Ah yes. I remember being in an old cemetary years ago and seeing a grave stone for a 3 year old boy. Aside from his name, and the dates, it said "Our Darling". Tears.
Posted by: Mary Symmes | Tuesday, 28 May 2019 at 12:38 PM
Beautiful words and picture.
Posted by: Jeanne Parvin | Tuesday, 28 May 2019 at 12:42 PM
Very lovely, thoughtful words
Posted by: Ann Watkins | Wednesday, 29 May 2019 at 08:22 PM